Justin Hubert Project #3 Critique 1

[Justin Hubert]

Hello,

These are my roughs for the graphic communications redesign.

This first design is my the one I am leaning towards developing further. I used the TMCC colors, and I made a logo for the GRC program that has good texture. I has a basic layout, but I like the feel of it for the most part.

Redesign 1 Home

Redesign 2 Page

This second layout again uses the TMCC colors and logo, and is a layout I wanted to experiment with. It needs more. but I like the center for navigation. The tabs would switch colors and be rollover image links.

Redesign 2 Home

Redesign 2 Page

[Juan Vazquez Lopez]

hello Justin,
You right, the first one looks more interesting than the second one although I do not know about the script type that is in the bottom of the bunch of type.

[re8ecca]

Hi Justin - I'm with you on the first set. The masthead/menu area is really well done, and it provides a great framework for the entire site. I like how you're sticking to the simple color scheme, but I would suggest using a bit more white to brighten it up a little. I'm just a little concerned that it will come across as too gloomy on your content pages.

[mawpe]

I really like the shapes radiating from the disk in the second layout, that's a really cool idea. I also like the stacked GRCs in the first. I think you win with either one

[donnalouwho]

i like them both! i think the first set has an awesome and very eye catching design on the home page. the second one is equally as cool but may be a bit dark? love the disk, maybe some white touches would bump it off just a little more? nice job on both though, very cool.

[DustDjinn]

Second layout! I love the button as the focus.

[jennybreitrick]

I am in love with your color scheme that you have going on! Both layouts are awesome! I can’t wait to see it finished.
jen

[I'mNicole]

Heya Justin.

I'm really trying to like your focal point on the first one, but I just can't! I can't even pinpoint why, exactly, although I do think you're wasting a lot of space on that inner page on the left side under the banner and around your logo. Your second design feels a lot stronger to me, and I love the idea of rollover images on the links on the homepage to add some color and interactivity. But where are the links going to go on the inner page?

[nunezm]

Hi Justin,
I agree with you the first set is going in the right direction. I really the home page and the logo for the GRC program. Can't wait to see the final product! Nice Job

[Alexey M]

Kinda hard to decide, they both look very cool. I like that green button on the second version of the home page. In whole they both look good. I think if you combine both, it will be perfect design.