project one pre
project one pre
These are my two comps. I didnt want anything normal. boxes with out organic lines bore me lol so i had to create something totally off the wall design. Why not??
Kami Lyon
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Kami,
I really like the top one, looks really nice, has your artist personality, and the little TMCC logo up top left is a nice touch.
Run with the 1st one you have, I'd really like to see a finished product for that.
Once addition: The blocks int he back I'd have them say something like GRC 175, or Portfolio, something you know, have them spell something out.
I really like the top one, looks really nice, has your artist personality, and the little TMCC logo up top left is a nice touch.
Run with the 1st one you have, I'd really like to see a finished product for that.
Once addition: The blocks int he back I'd have them say something like GRC 175, or Portfolio, something you know, have them spell something out.
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Hi Kami! Both designs looks great! I'm leaning a bit more towards the first one however.
The first one looks really cute and the palettes you picked I could imagine is going to be wonderful once finished. Maybe skew the blocks at the bottom a little bit instead of keeping them neatly aligned straight.
The first one looks really cute and the palettes you picked I could imagine is going to be wonderful once finished. Maybe skew the blocks at the bottom a little bit instead of keeping them neatly aligned straight.
Whinona Benavente - GRC 175
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Hey Kami, I think either design at this point can go in the right direction. I like the top one a tad bit more than the bottom one, I think you could play with the blocks in the background to spell something out like the ones you have in the front. =]
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As website home pages, I would have to say the first one would intrigue me the most.
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Both look very well put! I'm thinking more for the first one, I just reli like how that one feels. Can't wait to see the final of this!
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The second one has great color and a centering design helping the user find things easier. I'm going to have to go with the second, although both are very well done roughs.
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The bottom one is really cute, I love the fairies! Maybe more type is needed.
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I like the first one, maybe more images or type on the second. nice illustrations!!