grc_175_project1_rpereyra

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project_1. here are my two website that inspired me.http://vanwijk.wix.com/carl-van. I like the type, color choices and images, simple but effective. http://barcamporlando.org
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Of the two, I prefer your second rough. it looks more dynamic and the palettes you used remind me of a rubiks cube. I love it!

One thing I would suggest though is to maybe change the hue and saturation of the lines on your background? Push those colors back a little bit so you could make the puzzle pieces pop-out a little more. Good work!

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I really like the puzzle design. It really just intrigues me more. Although I think you can probably get rid of the buttons on the top, if your going to use them in the puzzle pieces themselves.
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Design #2 - Really...is there a comparison? But where's your name?
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I reli like your second design. Though, I like the simplicity of the first, it can be a bit too simple with what you might be going for. With the second design, I perceive it as being very intelligent and smart. If hats what you're going for than great! I love it. If you wanted a bit more of a designer/creativity feel, try changing the background to something more fun. It might just do the trick.

Great Job! :D
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The puzzle piece one is awesome. Love the 3-D space and how it draws your eye good color choice as well. Looks playful and I'm wondering how to incorporate that into the rest of the website? What if you could have the puzzle piece raise off on the rollover and then be the corner piece in the next page hmmmm??? IDK just throwing ideas out there!.
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I really enjoy number 2, as some have mentioned before, lighten the background lines, so that your puzzle pieces pop off more, and perhaps replace the bar with the links, with your name instead. Overall its looking really nice, just some minor adjustments.
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I also am going to jump of the band wagon of number two.. its more dynamic and interesting.
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I like the 2nd one better the colors work really well.
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Your second design is really interesting an dynamic, almost robotic, maybe you could find some really cool type that has a blocky kind of look?
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