Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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MattShock23
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Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Worked on two different design concepts that I liked based on my research and roughs. Two websites that gave me inspiration found here:
http://www.procivic.com/
http://www.pierfishing.com/
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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I like the logo you created for the second one, well done. Also, overall your second design is a better layout and more appealing visually. Your links on the second one do need some separation such as using divider lines, making them into buttons, or adding more padding. The first one has some cool textures in it though!.

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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Design #1 is more interesting. #2 is too symmetrical.
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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I'm really liking the look of the 1st comp, has a really good visuals to keep me interested and looking about the entire composition. The only thing I would suggest is to blend the out lying borders some so they don't feel like they are placed on top each other.
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I like the first design with the second design logo. The first one has nice texture.
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Herro! I'm leaning towards the second concept because I feel like it has more of the design element than in the first. I was thinking maybe picking more of a vibrant blue than the one you have chosen. It will probably make your page pop out more. Other than that... Great Job!
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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The second design looks more professional, and maybe you could do some cool buttons to add to the negative space.
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Heeeyyy matt! I'm liking your second rough so far! Liking your choice of type and how you distributed the elements throughout the layout too. However, I find it lacking some visual elements that your first rough has. How about merging the designs? Boxed buttons would certainly provide more visual interest in your second rough.

Good job so far!
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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Love the logo on the second deign, maybe give some space between the words on the navigation bar. great job!!!!

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Re: Prelim for Project 1 Juices!

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Two very different approaches that have merit. I can't vote for a favorite, except to say that I like the larger font for the class info. Also, will you actually link to project one?
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