revised_project_1_design_1

[grc_175_rpereyra]

here is another design, please what works and what doesn't.....ty

[charliepecot]

I'm not sure about the font choice. And maybe throw in some color variation? I like the fact the predominant colors are red and white, though.

[AWilburn]

This has a nice simple look, but I think using that red as a background might be a bit too warm.

[eARTh2haleypw]

Hey there! Beautiful logo design! The monochromatic + white color scheme works well for me. It's very simple but demands attention with the use of red. I'm not sure about the script font you used for your initials, it seems to elegant to be paired up with such a bold logo. Maybe you can try experimenting with a sans serif font as a replacement? Also don't forget to include the paragraph about yourself.

[MattShock23]

I'd have to agree with above, the red doesn't seem like its the best choice. Maybe a gray or a desaturated color. I do like the logo and the layout though, looks very clean.

[c.j.jackson775]

The red is a little loud but I think you could just tone it down instead of removing it. It's a nice layout, almost like a business card.

[kirin]

I enjoy the more resent design scheme you posted over this one. Its a little bright for me.

[Instructor]

Out of all the different designs you posted, this one it my favorite. I like the bold colors and the high contrast. I like the faint type in the background providing texture and I like the easy to follow layout. The type is bold and easy to read as well.

A couple quick things that will improve your design and really bring it all together. First, center the vertical bar in the middle of the page even if it leaves the text slightly lopsided. That vertical bar is such a stron eye mover that it stands out that it's off center. Second, make sure to visually align everything to the center of the page once you have that vertical bar centered. Third, remove the underscores from your project links. That's good web file naming, but these are links to files, not files themselves.

A nice clean design that's just about there. Nice work.

[elizabeth_mejia]

I really like the large letters on the background and the logo. It is a nice color too. My suggestion would be to add some sort of design to the buttons because they look a little to plan.

[eric_sallender]

I actually like the simplicity of the layout It's very clean and easy to understand, but also has enough pop to keep the audience entertained Great job.