Project 1 Final Juice...

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MattShock23
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Project 1 Final Juice...

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Here is the final for Project 1. Took the advice of most and blended the two designs together to make one super-juicy design that probably still sucks but fuck it.
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I like it, but am a little confused by the photo, in that I'm trying to reconcile the purpose of your site. If it's about your web design projects, then why are you holding a gun?
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charliepecot wrote: then why are you holding a gun?
You make a good point, maybe that's not the best photo for this site.
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That works for me.
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Solid layout, good colors, nice logo placement, very solid design, well done. Picture change was a nice touch. Also, maybe try adding some heading tags to your body copy mostly for SEO but to also make your audience know what they are looking at right away.
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I'm liking the concept and especially your logo. Although, the picture wasn't that much of a big deal, the new pic works fine. I'm liking the professionalism of your overal site and still adding a splash of design. Great job!
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Very nice web site, good color choices and layout. Cool logo. I like both image , second one goes better for the purpose of your web site. Thanks for your services Matt....welcome home.

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Ohhh I like how your mixed design turned out! Color choices are nice and the layout nicely divides your page. Liking especially how you color-picked your palettes from the imagery you have on your header so it created a sense of unity throughout the design. Overall, good job!
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Post by tehgrimza »

Need to add some more Juice to that photo! Naw, looks good, I like the mix of both designs, and the changed photo that doesn't read I will @$%^@&#% kill you. hahaha, make it happen! Good work Matt.
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I like the way it came out matt. I feel the gun picture works becuase it is a home page about you, why not incooperate a picture of who you are or what you have done.
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