Project1 Final

[eric_sallender]

Hey everyone, this is my updated website for project 1. I was told to space my buttons away from the header, so I fixed that and I added a footer to the bottom. I used the footer to reorganized the information in my page to try to make it less busy, while taking up the negative space I had at the bottom in my prelim. I also played with the color of my type on my buttons to try to pop them off and added a blur to the edges because they were too sharp. I hope you all like it better Have a great weekend!

[charliepecot]

Why is your name in such a subordinate position?

[c.j.jackson775]

This design is COOOOOL and I mean that in a color theory way The font and color of font choice for the navigation swirly water droplet things are not so great. It's hard to read, the movement is good but the color and font doesn't work I don't think. Also, with what Charlie was saying try swapping out "GRC175" with your name and see how that works. In other words, emphasize your name a lot more; the site is about you!

Good job with the design though COOOOL imagery.

[aznpandaaa]

I'm liking the water concept you got going on here. I'm glad you moved your buttons down and reli emphasized on buttons. Color choices work well too. I'm liking the blue a lot. I feel like a different typography choice wouldve made this even better... but other than that good job!

[grc_175_rpereyra]

Cool concept , like the colors. Type is a little hard to read on the image. Great job

[wbenavente]

Love the shades of blue you used and that translucent border that spreads across the top and bottom of your page is a nice touch. I think your type is readable but i'm finding the feathered outline and texture of your icons a little disorientating (I can't seem to look at it for too long and it's making me a little dizzy but maybe that's just me). Try cropping them for sharper corners? Otherwise, good work on the design!

[grc_175_rpereyra]

very nice design, like the colors. Type at the bottom is very hard to read. good job.

[tehgrimza]

Eric looks really good, I believe you need to place your name up top, and in front of that graphic bar you have coming across, and then move grc 175 to the bottom where you have your name presently. TMCC logo looks a bit edgy for some reason, perhaps make it w/ the pen tool? Overall, very pleasant to the eye, nice work.

[Deitrik]

I like the design overall I can see how the font can get lost in the water, but for the most part it is going to be a on a webpage up close so it shouldn't be too much of a problem. Its something I would play with though.

[kirin]

I LIKE IT!!!! The gold text with in the blue flows very well while still highlighting your text.