Project 1 Final

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elizabeth_mejia
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Project 1 Final

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This is how my website turned out :D I added color like a lot of people suggested and I really liked how it turned out : ] So I hope you all like it :D
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I like this, very nice layout and the leaf buttons are very nice they tie in with the rest of the imagery. One thing is the magenta colors you used seem to clash a little bit. You might try saturating it a bit but other than that, well done.
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aznpandaaa
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This looks cute! I'm reli liking your buttons as leaves and I like the overall design. I'm kinda questioning the color palette but it might just be my mind playing tricks on me. Otherwise Great final ^^
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It looks great but everything seems like you just placed it on the page. There's a little bit too much "regularity" with the spacing of your elements. Maybe turn one leaf around. The proximity of the tree to the right of your photo could be larger and be placed in back of your photo, just to give the layout some depth. Reverse the size and placement of "GRC175" and your name.
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I really like the use of colors. love your buttons..good job!!

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wbenavente
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Post by wbenavente »

Your layout is nice and those leaf buttons are a very nice touch! However your colors need a little work. Sea green + peach + pink are very nice individual colors but right now they don't look quite right coupled together. There're also several white (empty) spaces that need filling and tangents going on with how your graphics are kinda-sorta-almost touching yet not at the same time. Overlapping would greatly help solve the spacing problems! Otherwise, good work!
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tehgrimza
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Post by tehgrimza »

Oooo, I like the colors you've used, really bring the page layout to life!

Really nailed it down for the final, nice job!
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kirin
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Post by kirin »

Great design, I love the space between your heading and the content area. You might try a slightly bigger font size for the subheading before your paragraph, it just seems a little small to be floating out there by itself.
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Hm. Interesting.

You've got a very clean design that presents your information well. It's easy to read and has good contrast. I like the tree branch elements and the leaf navigation. Your buttons are well placed and easy to read and use. Excellent margins on all of your type. That's something some of your classmates are struggling with and I wanted to point it out on yours.

I'd remove the pink as it clashes with your otherwise pleasing black, teal, and salmon color scheme. Also, your layout lacks unity. Everything seems a little spread out. I think your design would have benefitted from being about 25% shorter. That way all the elements could lock together and make a unified whole.

There's a good design here that could have used a bit more tweaking. Good work, though.
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MattShock23
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I really like the way you incorporated the gradients and colors, and like everyone else mentioned, the buttons look great too. The only suggestion I have is to adjust your top and lower margins to the upper box to match the same thickness as your lower bar at the bottom of the page. Looks really nice though :)
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