Project One Final (really)

[charliepecot]

Final design fixed?

Fixed?

[c.j.jackson775]

Charlie I like this design alot the image is very nice and architecturally sophistacated, your fonts add to that sophistication which is nice and so do the colors, well done. BUT there is this little tangency thing going on with the buttons and the downward facing triangular shape to the left of them. It's pointing my eye out to the bottom of the design so I'm wondering if you might re-arrange those buttons to pull me back in. Maybe overlap them into the image so it pulls me back in or something like that. Other than that, well done.

[aznpandaaa]

I'm glad you chose this design. I'm liking the photography used here. It's simple and professional. Great Job!

[wbenavente]

Wonderful photograph. It pretty much established your entire web design, just add in some text and viola~! But anyway, your type choice is splendid. The colors are well picked and the hierarchy of type was done well that I don't really have anything to point out that needs improvement. Very professional and clean looking too! Overall, good job on your work!

[diggitydave]

Hey charlie,

Great homepage! It really does have a very professional feel to it and yet personal too. The picture gives the page a real sense of style, while it does make me think you might be an architect at first. Your fonts are working while a bit small for me. That might be my only real issue is that the size of the picture is very dominating to the other information.

[tehgrimza]

The photo really does just make this a wonderful piece. Sharp angles, contract, and how you use the type to tie it altogether. It looks clean and feels like its finished to me boss.

[Deitrik]

I like how you editied your buttons so they fit nicely into that space, the older version was throwing me off, the powered by merit media gets a little lost to me, maybe a darker blue?

[kirin]

Nice design, the only thing you might want to check is the tmcc terms and conditions for there logo. They're very strict.

[Instructor]

Yeah! Glad you picked this one. It was by far your strongest.

Excellent use of photography, type, color, contrast and layout. I really love how the whole layout works around the photo. It creates this fantastic sense of geometry that leads they eye through the design while staying out of the way of a pretty sweet background photo. I even like the "class logo"

My only critique is that I think I'd move the "designed by" text over to the left and make it a small bit of legalese oward the bottom rather than the relatively large element it is now.

Excellent, excellent work.

[elizabeth_mejia]

I like this design the photo you used is really great it gives the whole look a very professional feeling. And the blue color you chose for your name looks nice with your design. My only suggestion is the script type you used for your buttons is a little hard to read. But other than that everything looks good.