Project #1 - Final

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Deitrik
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Im such a fan of your work, the fish just look fresh out of a water color painting, the everything feels like it belongs amazing job.
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kirin
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AWESOME!!!!!! I loved this design. The only thing you can get rid of is the "project 1" button, since project one is the home page. Unless you are going to upload snap shots of how your created the site. GREAT JOB!
Nathan Kreager

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Bad, Chris! Bad! Giving her a heart attack like that. This website should be pretty easy to code actually.

Such a magnificent design Whinona. I love the watercolor look and paintbrush logo. It gives it such a warm personal feeling. It's like peeking into your artistic creativity. Excellent use of texture. Just excellent! Great colors and contrast. Nice use of type. I have no trouble reading anything, or following and using your navigation. Good stuff!

The only thing I'd maybe take a look at is beefing up your secondary navigation above your body copy just a tiny bit. It's not immediately obvious what it is.

Straight up awesome! I can't wait to see this thing functional.
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very nice, looks professional..awesome job!!

elizabeth_mejia
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Post by elizabeth_mejia »

This looks amazing! I love the two fish and the colors you used, and that watercolor feel is just awesome. It all goes together so well. The only suggestion I can think of is using some of that salmon color that you have around the boarder edges and put a lighter color of that on the outside of your design so it isn't all white and that would make all the content on the inside of the paint stroke stand out because its white.
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MattShock23
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You nailed it for Asians everywhere. I really like how you incorporated the water color theme with the delicious fishees. The only thing I could suggest is possibly going with the red and black color scheme to match up with calligraphy ink? Nice job though.
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i really enjoy the layout. the colors are great on it too
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wbenavente
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MattShock23 wrote:The only thing I could suggest is possibly going with the red and black color scheme to match up with calligraphy ink?
Ooooh— I could go with red and black. However the fishes are going to be a little too colorful for the monochromatic theme so i'll prolly hafta decolorise them. Thanks for the suggestion though, i'll try it out.
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danistephens3
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I love this! I think that by bring more color to the design really added to the feeling of the whole thing. I really like the W for your first name in as well as it being sort of a logo. I think that it really show cases what you feel about design.
Great job!
Danielle Stephens
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This is really pretty and original, it doesn't look like most websites, but I'm sure it'll be very fun to design!
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