Project 1 Final

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danistephens3
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Project 1 Final

Post by danistephens3 »

Hey everyone!
I took your advice and got rid of the blue box that enveloped the "about me" section. I have to tell you though, the background image is not a work of me or my own. This piece was done by a street artist by the name of David Walker
(http://www.artofdavidwalker.com). I just loved the piece so much that I wanted to use it as my background. I gave credit to the artist on the final design as well. I also tried to keep the solid colors to a minimum to not take away from the attention grabbing background. Hope you enjoy it! Thanks!
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elizabeth_mejia
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Post by elizabeth_mejia »

Wow this looks really great I love the background graphic and your head shot kind of matches it so that's cool. I really like the shapes you used too. My only suggestion is to maybe change the color of "web design and publishing spring 2014" to white type instead of blue so it stands out more. Also give your paragraph some space between the HI because they look too close together. But other than those little minor things its great!
-Elizabeth Mejia-

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charliepecot
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It's colorful, and random, but not too random. I like it.
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Deitrik
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Post by Deitrik »

Very awesome, I love the transparent box and that we can see the rest of the face in your design.
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eric_sallender
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Post by eric_sallender »

The background image is beautiful and regardless of if it's your or not, I'm glad you used it :) In a sense, it kind of hypnotizes me as I stare at it. It definitely draws your eye in and keeps it for a while. Great job!
^.^~Eric Sallender~^.^

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eARTh2haleypw
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Post by eARTh2haleypw »

I'm really liking the changes you have made from your preliminary work. I think the transparency of your content box is much more effective as it reveals the entire face of the girl. Such a gorgeous piece , no need to cover it. I also like the image of yourself that you added and the incorperation of various shapes around it. Very interesting. One thing I noticed that could improve the deign is to add space around your body copy. The margins are pretty tight.
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kamilyon
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Post by kamilyon »

nice job
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AWilburn
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Post by AWilburn »

I think this looks really nice. I like that you're playing with the rectangular boxes surrounding your photo.
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grc_175_rpereyra
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Post by grc_175_rpereyra »

awesome website!!!!!

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aznpandaaa
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Post by aznpandaaa »

I'm especially loving the artwork that is the main focus of your website. Very pleasant! Great Job!
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