Project One Final-Jonathon J.
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Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.
Wow really nice design. I love the photo you used it makes it look so clean and professional especially how you organized the content. The black, gray, and white gives it a nice feel. My only suggestion would be to maybe change the paragraph color from black to white so it stands out more against the dark grey bridge behind it.
- MattShock23
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Looks really good Jonathon, your pic is hilarious and the design seems on par. Maybe reduce the scale of the logo just a bit like everyone else said and I think you've nailed it.
- graceinreno
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This has a really great feel to it, and I love your original background image. And to be sure, your personal logo is totally bitchin. Personally, I would prefer to see a bit of color, even one little splash! I also think you could work with the paragraph alignment of your main body text and do a spellcheck. Regardless, it's a good looking site and that picture of you is utterly adorable.
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I like the background image that you chose. It goes well with the other elements of the design. I think adding a splash of color here and there would really make it pop. Great job!
Danielle Stephens
Hitch your wagon to a star
Hitch your wagon to a star
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This site has a nice, professional quality about it that works! The only issue I have is your body copy is getting a little lost because of the backfround image, but it's nothing too big. Great job.
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- eARTh2haleypw
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Hey there! Can I just say awesome, awesome logo! I really admire the fact that you decided to incorporate your own photography. It's a beautiful image and I think it works well. I also enjoy your adherence to grayscale - very sophisticated. I do agree that the balancing of the content on the tip of the pier creates tension and not in a good way. otherwise, nice work!
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-Haley Williams
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I really like your background photograph and your profile image! The boxes are cool too.
Chelsea Bosco
Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.
Haha...fun portrait pic. Like the picture you took that is in the backround. Nice Job!
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