Daves Final Project 1

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mccuske2
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

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i enjoy the film look. the colors go great, it is a hard read.
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Deitrik
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

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I like the theme of this design, I'm kind of curious what it would look like a grey scale theme, with maybe a old movie grain texture? Very cool and unique idea.
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danistephens3
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by danistephens3 »

I love the imagery you chose to use in the BG. Its very interesting to look at. The font ,for me, is a little too script-y but it does go well with the design. Great job!
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eric_sallender
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by eric_sallender »

This looks pretty good :) The only issue on my end is trying to read your script font. I would go a different way with your smaller type because it is very hard to read. I love the atmosphere you've created in your design though! I want to go want an old school movie now lol
^.^~Eric Sallender~^.^

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eARTh2haleypw
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by eARTh2haleypw »

Hey there Dave! I'm really liking this film theme that your going with, it suits you well. The film buttons are an awesome idea. I'm wondering though if it'd be more visually pleasing to take them out of there background so they stand as circles. Also maybe you can manipulate them a bit so they look more uniform and the same. Perhaps select a warmer yellow as the drop shadow of your navigation buttons to match that rustic feel you've established. Otherwise, nice work and cool idea!
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grc_175_rpereyra
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by grc_175_rpereyra »

I like the layout, very cool design..good job

tabasco_lynn
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by tabasco_lynn »

This looks very cool, like American Horror Story... Maybe tone down the red because it looks bloody....
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oasib
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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by oasib »

Good corrections, I liek that you changed the color of your fond, it work a lot nicer, also it has a better readability with your new fond option. Works a lot better then your rough, I would play a little with your navigational buttons idea (they looks a little bet out of place), otherwise good corrections! Nice job!
Amy (oasib)

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Re: Daves Final Project 1

Post by grc_175_rpereyra »

looking good, very nice image and good layout.nice

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