Revise_#2_project_1_design_1

[grc_175_rpereyra]

just trying colors, what works what doesn't

[kirin]

I like the colors, but I'm not sure if about the letter covering the lions face. I really enjoy the initials in the background, awesome detail.

[elizabeth_mejia]

I really like the logo you have at the top and I like the colors. The only thing I suggest is maybe to make the button bar and buttons a little smaller. They seem a little too large but that's just me.

[wbenavente]

I like the rose color you used against the dark background. Your choice of type is nice too! The division between the buttons and the place where you placed the info allowed more balance between your design elements!

One thing I would point out though is to maybe take off the static texture of your background and push back the big "RP" type. Lowing its opacity might help. Good work!

[charliepecot]

Maybe use a picture of a lion's head as a button?

[oasib]

I like this revised work better then all red page option. Nice contract, also I like that you took the white box that you had your logo in, it looks a lot nicer when it free, it has a nice negative space. I would try realigning the R and P u have on the top, maybe try moving the letter P down, and then in the spaces it creates in a smaller text size lower case spell your name out. Just a thought. I think that the big capital R P is taking away from your cool logo design, and make me thing that RP is the logo and not the R with the line. I hope it is making scene of what I am trying to say. Also, maybe consider making your navigational buttons same size to have consistency. Overall, nice revise version!

[c.j.jackson775]

the buttons for project 1 and project2 are too big scale them back, they are stealing from the rest of your design, you are definitely heading in a better direction and the colors are working. And that texture in the BG, nice job. I also agree with the letter "R" in the lions head. Maybe try that scripty R your'e using in the Header or just omitting it.

[tabasco_lynn]

I like your speckled background, and your lion logo; however, the shiny red buttons don't seem to compliment the entire design.