Revision of design 2

[tehgrimza]

Thoughts, changes, comments?

[AWilburn]

Your type should be rearranged so you're not hyphenating it.

[mccuske2]

its very colorful. It doesn't seem like your first ones. I really like your other one better

[charliepecot]

Maybe a little drop shadow on the buttons, just so we can distinguish them from the other text? I can that it's yellow, but maybe that's not enough?

[c.j.jackson775]

Mark,
the way your playing with the imagery and the type is soooo cool, so cool but, the imagery seems a little bitmapped or pixelated. I don't know if you made this image or found it, anyways, it wouldn't be hard to re-make that in Illustrator so it's more scalable. That would take the blurriness away and leave a crisp cog in the front, then, as you go farther back in the design the cogs seem to fade away which gives the layout a nice 3-dimensional look. Also, I think there may be some better font choices than the ones you are you using but the concept is fantastic, good job.

[wbenavente]

Heyyyaaa,
like chris said, your background image is kind of bitmapped. But other than that loving the concept of a color wheel being used as buttons!! Your type choice is good too but try experiment on others as well?? Other than that, job well done!

[grc_175_rpereyra]

nice layout, image in the foreground is blurry. good design concept.

[Deitrik]

I like how it has come along so far, I would kind of like to see the type on the right more blocked out like our teacher showed us how to last class instead of just the middle aligned format, other wise good job.

[tabasco_lynn]

Your body copy shouldn't be in all caps, it's harder to read, but your colors are very nice. I like the gears of the color wheel!