H. Williams Preliminary Critique Project 2

[kirin]

I like the second layout the most. It looks very professional, which makes it very hard to critique. I'm not sure what you can do to improve your design.

[graceinreno]

I love both designs, very lovely and professional. I was initially leaning toward the first design, but have now settled into the second. It feels subtle, relaxing and elegant. Both logos are excellent. I simply LOVE that first logo, I can almost feel and smell some tea or coffee on my face. Perhaps you could integrate logo 1 with design 2, and add a ribbon of red inflection? I'd hire you any day.

[aznpandaaa]

this yet the second design i've come to that I like both designs. Both are welcoming, and well designed. I'm not sure which one you would choose but either one works for me. I reli like the type, photography, and overall design. Grest Job! =D

[c.j.jackson775]

I think both designs are really solid. the one with the black and red color scheme seems to be more inviting which is good for coffee places. I think you could play around with proportions on your headings and body copy. Maybe play with fonts a little relating to Coffee.

[AWilburn]

I'm more drawn to the first design because of the bold type and the colors. I can't think of much more to say than that, I like your design.

[JonathonJames]

I like both designs, I like the imagery of the second (lighter design) but i love the boldness of the first design. possibly blending your nav menu of the second design to the first design might look nice. good job.

[kamilyon]

I really like both of these so i cant choose

[mccuske2]

I like the 1st one. The color on it makes is pop better to me.

[oasib]

Great roughts!!! both look amazing, i like the first one because it is more bold and it has red color in it. Red color rises person’s blood pressure, heart rate, and causes hunger to be more prevalent. Eather way u go, they both look amazing!!