Ooops... mah bad!

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What you think?

Eh... its better.
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Ooops... mah bad!

Post by aznpandaaa »

I realized this morning that I did everything I needed to for the project and put it on the server yesterday but I hadn't created a post to link to it.... MAH BAD YOU GUYS!!! lol....

Here is my Final for project 2 (Homepage)
http://www.grc175.com/student/spring_20 ... index.html

Here is the direct link to Project 2
http://www.grc175.com/student/spring_20 ... /pro2.html
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site looks cool, I think you have to upload it again because its pushing way to the right. html seems to be broken.

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Hm. Something is broken in your container div CSS and it's smushed your site off the right side of my browser. Fix it!

From what I can see your Project One has a nice layout. Shrink your type though. It's way too crowded.

Your Project Two is not bad (once I scroll over to it). I like the use of the yellow background and contrasting black graphics. The diagonal navigation is a nice touch as well. A very different look.

A couple of things do stand out that could be fixed (aside from the whole "pinned off the right" issue) . One, your graphics are a bit two heavily optimized so that makes them look blurry and choppy. Crispness is the name of the game here. Two, I think your diagonal navugation could have used a rollover or some sort of indication that I'm either supposed to click here or a change when I do click here. Three, I'm not keen on your type. I think some left aligned sans-serif type would serve you better.

A good effort!
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Post by elizabeth_mejia »

I think your website turned out pretty cool! Much better than the original that's for sure! I really like all the different images you have on the "cars/vans" page really nice. The weird thing is your content container looks like it got pushed all the way to the right of the page so just fix that and I think you're good.
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wbenavente
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Post by wbenavente »

omg you were able to make the horizontal navigation bar on project 2. Good work!! your website looks a lot better than the original...pile of.. gifs.. i don't even know lol but anyway! All you navigation works and it can be a bit disorientating because the navi is tilted but I think it works well with your project 2 design.

Your project 1 also looks good! love the use of texture here to create some sorta medieval/fantasy feeling to it. Maybe watch out with the padding inside your boxes and make it so the text doesn't touch the edge of the box. Otherwise, good work!
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It looks ok, It's an improvement on the original for sure!

I think that the yellow is very bright, but it also gets your attention...
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Your site is much more neat and orderly than Ling's. What is she thinking? I like the colors but I'd turn down that yellow background... it kind of burned a hole in my retina and now there is fluid all over my keyboard.
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Post by tabasco_lynn »

The yellow background is really bright!!! But the organization looks good :)
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I like the yellow scheme and the car images. My only suggestion is to use a larger and bolder typeface for your content area
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