project_2_final

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wbenavente
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I love the consistent color palettes you used throughout your design. It reminds me of the tropics!

Your project 1 looks nice and organized and are mostly spaced just right. All the buttons work and love the photographs you used. Looks great!
Your project 2 also has a nice set of photographs and color choices. One thing I noticed though is there isn't much information given about the company and its products. Other than that good job!
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I love what you did with this.. but one thing.. you picture is crooked and it makes me feel like the whole thing is tilted.. but other than that it looks really good
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Nice ideas.

Your revised project one looks pretty good. It needs a background color, though. My vote is for the teal you're using in your top banner and content area.

The second design has a clean, alpine feel, thanks to it's color scheme and Tahoe image background. The layout is easy to navigate and use. I like your choice of fonts and how it works with your layout and colors.

I think you need to make the Tahoe image a true background image on your body tag rather than just in your container div. The white background is a little jarring. Also, the whole layout feels a little bit crowded. I think it needs to be expanded (shrink the images slightly, add a little more margin) to give it room to breathe.

All in all a good effort.
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I think your website turned out really nice. I really like that blue and brown color scheme that's going on. And that image of the lined up beers in the "gallery" page is really nice great photo. My only suggestion is for the background photo it doesn't seem to cover the full page and it has just a white background. Maybe make the photo cover the whole page or give the background a blue or brown color that matches your page.
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hahahaha! Liking your kegs page! Nice use of imagery! It really brings in the viewer. Also, I like how you used neutral colors in your links and text boxes so as not to detract from the images. Something I think could have been done differently is your social media icons. There pretty tiny comparatively and may look better if scaled larger. Otherwise, nice work!
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I'm liking the revision. It nice and clean. I also like the use of the photographs in the page.... althugh it may be a bit overwhelming at times, maybe stick to one side of photos and use the other side for links. Anyway, Good job! =)
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Your revision looks way better than the original website, the text seems a little too big though… maybe a 14pt font would look a little less blocky...
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Good Job, I really like the vacation feeling that comes off of your sight.
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Looks really nice, the background image especially. However, it kind of feels busy since you have a lot of images butting right up against one another.
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