Project two final

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Project two final

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Kami Lyon

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I like the layout of your project 2 website It's very nice and the typography is cool. Unfortunately all you did was post a bunch of images including the type which, in the future is not best practice. Live type is the way google finds your page, so if it's in an image it would be very hard for google to use for their Search Engine Optimization (SEO).
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I reli like the final outcome of both your pro1 and pro2. For pro2, I'm reli liking the professionalism of the page. I reli like the font for the header as well. It works very well! Each page works and defiantly a btr layout =). Good job!
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project 2 is looking really good, like the background images used for the header and container, fonts are also cool. good job!!!

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Good to see you got everything up and running.

The Project One has a very cute feel and seems to be working well. I think it could use a background color though.

Your Project Two has a great rustic feel to it. The textures are working well and really serve to warm up the website. It's easy to navigate and I think the logo painted on the top banner is a very strong look. The layout is easy to read and process and it blends the photos and text well. I really like that you kept with a simple, clean layout and let the textures do the selling.

Just a couple of issues from what I can see. One, your navigation has a blend of single line and two line buttons. Try to make them more uniform on future projects. Two, On my browsers it looks like you have your website contained in a scrolling div. You don't need to do that. Browsers will scroll all on their own when content gets too tall.

A nice effort! I especially like the textures.
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Post by elizabeth_mejia »

Great website! I love the texture you used on the background and the logo looks amazing. The website has a lot of images nice images which I like and it is easy to navigate. My only suggestion is the font type on the "about us" page is a little hard to read but other than that really great website.
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oh wow Kami! This is great! Project 1 is so well done and adorable!

Project 2 is very nice as well. I really enjoy the various wood textures and how the little humming bird logo is simi transparent. Very interesting! I do think it'd be better to stick to one or two type faces though...looks like you have four or five and it's a bit disjointing. Something that I really liked was the use of transparency on your "Rates & Availability" page. It's so cool to be able to see that nice wood texture coming through from the background. I think it'd be great if you employed this technique throughout your site - maybe onto the "Petting Zoo" boxed area also? I feel that you have a solid idea there that ought to be carried throughout to unify your site in its entirety. Otherwise, well done!
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Your project one is really personal and a creative piece of website. Great way to show who you are and what your passion is about!

Your project 2 is also amazing. Great use of the wooden background photograph. It adds texture to the website. The type matches the theme and the color choices are nice! Good job! I'm wondering though why you have an extra scroll bar at the side??
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I'm going to have to agree with Chris, using images instead of html type isn't a good thing to do.

for your project 1 I feel its a tad small and confined- I'm on a 27in monitor and there is soo much white space around your work.

Project 2 works a little better, minus everything being an image.
-Jonathon J.

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Post by AWilburn »

Hey Kami, your site looks really nice. In your gallery page, when I scroll down I see the word GALLERY in what looks like a typeface I'd use for a title, but it's pushed down below the actual gallery. Also, in your text boxes you seem to be pretty close to the right edge. Other than that, I think it's a cool site. It makes me want to go there.
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