Project 3 Roughs

Post links to your Project Three websites for discussion and feedback.
User avatar
tehgrimza
Posts: 64
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:29 pm

Project 3 Roughs

Post by tehgrimza »

Version 1 - Yeah. TMCC and shit!!

Image

Image




Version 2 - just a home page with the other pages changing the content shown under the NAV BAR.

Image
Last edited by tehgrimza on Sat May 03, 2014 11:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
Image

mccuske2
Posts: 78
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:29 pm

Re: Project 2 ROughs

Post by mccuske2 »

i like the second one. it move the eye throw it better then the first one
~*~ Tammy McCusker ~*~

c.j.jackson775
Posts: 93
Joined: Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:18 pm
Contact:

Re: Project 2 ROughs

Post by c.j.jackson775 »

Your first one is different. I think with a little more typography work, you could do some cool stuff.
Image That about sums it up!! --Chris Jackson

User avatar
wbenavente
Posts: 116
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:32 pm

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by wbenavente »

hmmm I like your second design better tbh. I like the layout and it looks more welcoming because.. less spikes yo.

One thing I would suggest though is to just stretch the entire white box and have the bg all white?
Black header, green boxes, and the black footer are already perfect as they are so don't change them!
I just thought that having double containers looks a lil visually-tight but other than that, great start!
Image
Whinona Benavente - GRC 175
“Talent is a pursued interest. Anything that you're willing to practice, you can do.” - Bob Ross

User avatar
Instructor
Site Admin
Posts: 1946
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:51 am

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by Instructor »

I think you have a pretty darn strong first one here. I especially like the inner page. It looks like a banner. And the horizontal one looks like a flag. It's got great use of contrast and it minimizes TMCC's hideous green. I like the faded college seal and the TMCC logo. The navigation is also strong and easy to use. It's got a great information presentation area.

Bring the zig zags up closer to the navigation on the vertical one though. Also shrink the "Truckee Meadows Community College" type a point or two, so it doesn't have to be so bunched up. Scoot your navigation down a touch as well so it doesn't touch the school seal.

Looking good!
"Inspiration is for amateurs. The rest of us just show up and get to work." — Chuck Close

Michael Ganschow-Green - GRC 175 Instructor
mganschow@tmcc.edu | 673-8200 ext.5-2173

eric_sallender
Posts: 52
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:29 pm

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by eric_sallender »

I'm liking the first one a lot more :) The sharp shapes add an edge to your design :D I would extend the text box though, I feel like you're going to need more space for information.
^.^~Eric Sallender~^.^

User avatar
aznpandaaa
Posts: 111
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:29 pm

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by aznpandaaa »

Im reli liking the first design choice. The border/shape design tat you did seems to be pleasing to look at. I like the level of professionalism as well. Great job!
ImageImageImage
Aljen Manuzon (AJ) ^______^v

elizabeth_mejia
Posts: 92
Joined: Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:51 am

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by elizabeth_mejia »

I am really liking your first design the strong shapes are very eye catching. The colors go well together as well. My suggestion is to maybe make the buttons a little larger so they stand out more or maybe put a color box behind them.
-Elizabeth Mejia-

Image

User avatar
charliepecot
Posts: 126
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:38 pm
Location: Sparks, NV
Contact:

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by charliepecot »

No. 2. I would add dotted lines to make it look like a box that needs folding, as well as other items that would allude to that concept.
Image

If all the world's a stage, then I want my SAG fees back.

grc_175_rpereyra
Posts: 104
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:33 pm

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by grc_175_rpereyra »

First layout looks good. It's coming along well. Good job

Locked