Preliminary for Project 3 - Elizabeth Mejia

[elizabeth_mejia]

These are my roughs for project three

[c.j.jackson775]

I'm liking what you did with the second design. The home page is interesting leaving me to want more than the second page is like BLAM with all this stuff coming out of the screen.

[tehgrimza]

2nd design is what I'm leaning towards, has a very nice color scheme, and flow. As mentioned too the use of the screen when you go the next page, any plans on changing the color of that depending on the page you're on?

[wbenavente]

I like your first design just because I love that background behind your content box. Red splashes looks like blood and I believe everyone has shed blood and tears just to pass this program so.. long story short GO FOR FIRST DESIGN lol!

Everything looks good and in place. One thing I would suggest though is maybe adjusting the opacity of your content box just to help pop-out the text a bit more. The transparency is making the letters a wee bit hard to read. Other than that good start!

[Instructor]

What is it with you and graphics that make me laugh. I'm cracking up over that headshot monitor. It's totally true to the program.

Looks like you also cracked the green code. Both the designs use TMCC's unmentionable awful green in a ... palatable ... way. Personally I think your second design is a little stronger. I'm getting too much interference from the monitor image background in the first one and losing the type a bit.

The second one uses the imagery just as well, but it doesn't interfere with the content. I like the contrast in to top bar. I think the navigation is very strong and easy to use. The content is well laid out with good margin and padding. The typography is also pretty good. I see an instant informational hierarchy and I have not trouble reading your type.

I think you can extend your text over toward the right a bit more on your home page. Watch your bottom padding on the inner page. Scoot the TMCC logo at the top down a touch on both pages so you can have a little room between it an the top edge of your top bar.

A good start. And another design that uses the green well.

[eric_sallender]

Haha I'm loving the second concept a lot more. It's easier to read. Great job

[aznpandaaa]

im leaning towards the second design because of the solidity. I do like what you are trying to do in the first one, but I tend to lose the bg pic and almost cant make out what it is at first. xP.... BUTT (hehe...) second one is professional and nice. =)

[charliepecot]

No.2. - looks like blood coming out of the computer.

[grc_175_rpereyra]

I like layout to better, image in front looks much better. Good layout.

[tabasco_lynn]

I like the second group better with explosive monitor on the second page. It might need to be a bit more balanced though.