Website!-Jonathon J.

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JonathonJames
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Website!-Jonathon J.

Post by JonathonJames »

Here is my finished product:


Project 1
http://grc175.com/student/spring_2014/j ... index.html

Project 2:

http://grc175.com/student/spring_2014/j ... cupcakery/

When I go to student work on the grc175 page, and click my name and try to get to the project 2 page, it doesn't work... Not sure what I did wrong.... However, when I type in index.html on project 1, I can get to the appropriate page...

IDK...
-Jonathon J.

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"The perfect blend of pink and puff." Indeed. 8-)

Must have been a caching issue when you couldn't see it. I have no problems seeing it here.

Looks like we've got another excellent Project Two for sure. Like Whinona's it's super professional, well laid out with a good sense of proportion. The color is nice as well. It allows the cupcake colors to stand out and focuses the eye on your photos and type which is where they should be. Good use of margin and padding througout. And nice work with the details (social media links, copyright, etc.). It feels very professional to me. And you even have a form! And a Facebook feed! Nice!

The only issue I see is that "About Us" seems to be higher than the surrounding buttons on your top navigation. Also, I'd see what it looks like with justified type.

Excellent website. Good work, sir.
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Both websites are minimalisitic, straightforward and really clean. I love the feel of your project 1 websites and you carried that cleanliness and organization to your project 2 as well! Maybe it's the grayscale that makes it easy on the eyes. Very nice choice of type and rounding up the corners of the photos was a great idea!
Good job!
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Post by AWilburn »

Michael already made the comment about your "About Us" and its alignment... the only other thing that throws me off is that your copyright info in the bottom corner is in italics, while none of the other info relating to it received the same treatment.

Your colors are really nice, and I like the way you organized the primary shapes to make this site organized and fun.

Good stuff.
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really nice design, liker the home page images, colors looks great. nice job

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Post by tabasco_lynn »

This is a very professional design… you should have them pay you ;) I like the design a lot…. good job!
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I would have gone with either a white or black background. That gray is kinda buggin' me. Or maybe some random radial background, simulating spotlights.
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Very nice! I like the images. The one in the header could probably be a little bigger, there just seems to be some empty space in there. All around very professional.
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Post by kirin »

Love the design, and beautiful images. The only issue is the "about us" tab, its slightly higher than the others.
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Post by MattShock23 »

Cupcake website looks really clean, love the contrast between the vibrant colors. Home page is good too, but it seems to be lacking a bit of information. Good Job overall
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