Hi Alexa,
Looks like you have started a better designed website than the original.
Wish there was another design to choose from….
So going with this design.
I like the composition you have started.
Looks like the navigation is found right away and you can read it based on size and location.
I like the racing flag banner…
but the name gets lost in it.
Well have to see what it looks like once its done in Photoshop to really tell.
I like the look of the font but not sure if that’s what it will look like.
Can’t wait to see what you do.
Nice work.
Georgia
Project 2 Preliminary Critique
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gotsatisfaction247
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
I be honest in is kinda hard to comment when there is not much there, lets see some more of your work!!
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justinepaigek
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Hi, Alexa!
Though you only have one rough, I really like the layout and design concept so far! It really ties together the theme with the services being advertised, and would definitely make me excited to take driving lessons from this company! I think if you found a cool typeface that reflected that race car feel, it would take this design to the top!
Though you only have one rough, I really like the layout and design concept so far! It really ties together the theme with the services being advertised, and would definitely make me excited to take driving lessons from this company! I think if you found a cool typeface that reflected that race car feel, it would take this design to the top!
"I believe if you look hard, there are more wonders in this universe than you could ever have dreamed of."
Van Gogh said this. Not the real one, probably, just the one in that episode of Doctor Who.
Van Gogh said this. Not the real one, probably, just the one in that episode of Doctor Who.
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Alexa,
I think this looks pretty good so far; nicely laid out and organized. If the colors on the rough are what you're actually planning, I think you have a little bit too many of them; I would probably pick one to eliminate, such as the blue, to make it more cohesive. Alternatively, a red, black, and white color scheme is usually the go-to for racing websites, so you might try that too! Anyway, I look forward to the final design!
I think this looks pretty good so far; nicely laid out and organized. If the colors on the rough are what you're actually planning, I think you have a little bit too many of them; I would probably pick one to eliminate, such as the blue, to make it more cohesive. Alternatively, a red, black, and white color scheme is usually the go-to for racing websites, so you might try that too! Anyway, I look forward to the final design!
Ryan Segal
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wendy_boddy
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Looks good!
I like the speedometers on the bottom.
Looking forward to seeing your flushed out version.
wendy
I like the speedometers on the bottom.
Looking forward to seeing your flushed out version.
wendy
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Oh goodness, the colors of the original site are burning my eyes. I definitely think you have a good start going here, and I like the car theme you have going. There's also a visible and easy to use navigation going, bless you for that. I'd like to see what color scheme you'll be using but, beyond that I think this one has a lot of potential and is on the right track.
Cristina Sánchez
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
I like the layout.
I think it would be looks good.
But, I'm not sure about the flag.
It's hard to read the name of company because of the flag, so you can play with the layout a little bit.
Kiwako
I think it would be looks good.
But, I'm not sure about the flag.
It's hard to read the name of company because of the flag, so you can play with the layout a little bit.
Kiwako