Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

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ElizabethBrass
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Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

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Hi Guys,

Here are my roughs for project 3.
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Project_3_rough_2_about.png
Project_3_rough_2.png
This is an internal page
This is an internal page
This is what it will look like when you hover over the photos
This is what it will look like when you hover over the photos
this is the cover for the first rough.
this is the cover for the first rough.
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rrodriguez
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by rrodriguez »

Elizabeth,

I like both designs a lot. The type treatment for both are cleaver and unique. But if I HAD to chose, it would be roughs 1. The rollover idea for the home page is creative and innovative. I would want to see buttons on inside layout though. But I like the layout treatment for your inside page, from roughs 2. I don't know how you'd feel of merging to two together? But you could go with either or and it would be good. Nice start
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by paula_b »

Hi Elizabeth! I have to go with rough 2 (I think) The green and white ones with the image of the building. I'm confused because the center picture says rough 1 but looks like rough 2. Anyway, it's a beautiful, inviting layout. Great example of the rule of thirds.
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by recordd »

Hi Elizabeth!
Good Job of both of your designs! I really like the unique idea of making photos your link to the pages in rough#1 but I feel that it looks to busy. So, I am leaning more towards rough #2 which is the one with the beautiful campus images as the background and includes the white stripe and awesome branding GRC logo/page title. I think this layout is professional, simplistic, and well balanced with use of white space. I think the color scheme and typography work well together. One thing that I would suggest is to include TMCC's address info. down in the left or right corner. Nice job and I cant wait to see your final design!
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

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Hi Elizabeth

I like the typographic, layout, color on your rough2,
your rough 1 is interesting, it can be cool too: )
Good job!

Lingling

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Sierragirlnv
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by Sierragirlnv »

Hi Elizabeth,

I am digging your first layout it has a repetitive affect to it that the viewer could see it was still attached to TMCC. I think the flow is nice as well as the aesthetics. I like the round affect you have given the different categories, it goes well with the font choice in the "G".

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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by georgia_novotny »

Hi Elizabeth,
Good job on both your designs.
I think either one would work.

I think I like your rough 2 ideas more because of the pictures you used.
Visually they are very strong in communicating the campus.
I think you did a great job in doing that with our high desert surroundings.

Nice Job,
Georgia

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old_man_pat
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by old_man_pat »

Hi Elizabeth! While both designs are strong, I lean toward rough number 1. If I understand your footnotes, the 'About' page titled 'Graphic Communications' is the inside page for rough 1, giving it a similar look to rough 2. I like the use of windows in the home page layout as a link for your inner pages. I also think the artwork as the background image for 'Gallery' works well. I look forward to seeing what you decide for your final design.
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I like the top set of roughs more. They exude the clean design with which you work so well. I like the vertical column in the middle; I would just watch the balance if you end up adding other items.
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Re: Elizabeth project 3 Roughs

Post by kiwakom »

I enjoyed both designs. Personally, I like the rough 2.
The TMCC photo is very nice. Also, I like the logo.

Good job!

Kiwako

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