Project 1

natsukigrc175 · Post by **natsukigrc175** » Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:44 am

I feel better on your second rough! Good color choice and illustration, also look organized, balanced, and easy to find navigation. Only thing is that the fish is touching to the text, so I would fix it. Other than that, it looks great!

warren.asher@gmail.com · Sun Sep 20, 2015 8:23 am

I think the first one works better in terms of layout. I think the font you chose is to legible at least with the first letters and I think you could use a lighter hue of blue. It's too dark with the black background

anna_lyse · Post by **anna_lyse** » Sun Sep 20, 2015 11:41 pm

I'm really digging the second rough you posted with the koi fish in it. The second rough is well organized and flows, the only suggestion I could make would to do something with the space around the contact me section.

sierra_style · Post by **sierra_style** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 9:36 am

I like your second layout more I think it is more organized and more interesting to look at. I like how the fish overlaps onto other parts of the design. I think that your body copy and subheads could be more interesting to add to your layout.

ravennvrmre · Post by **ravennvrmre** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 2:35 pm

Both work but I like the bottom design with the fish better; it feels more of an open design. I also like that the fish overlaps other sections. If you go with the top design then I would consider changing the button font, it’s hard to read but great start, keep up the good work.

Oreo_Chaos · Post by **Oreo_Chaos** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:38 pm

It would be superb if you could slap those both together and make a hybrid -Indominius

papasmurf124 · Post by **papasmurf124** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:40 pm

I'm defiantly getting a Tattoo vibe like the second one better the fonts are more readable. I would try to work on your layout a little.

dzynecin88 · Post by **dzynecin88** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:59 pm

I think I like your second design best, although they're both interesting. I like the movement the fish provides and the layout seems more elegant and clear. I also like your color choices.

nikkihillman · Post by **nikkihillman** » Mon Sep 21, 2015 6:13 pm

Both look great. I think I prefer the second one most likely for the strong imagery and the borders. Plus, it makes it easy to read.

Stalksyouatnight · Post by **Stalksyouatnight** » Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:36 pm

I prefer the second one because it has better spacing and feels cleaner. I could reconmmend addiding more space so everything overall can breathe.

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