Project 1 Critique

[warren.asher@gmail.com]

I really like the looks of the second one and the links look well. I would suggest putting a text box behind the body copy in a white hue with low opacity. At the moment there are contrast issues and its hard to read with the background.

[nicolemae09]

I like the bottom design color palette more out of the two. I am feeling that there needs to be added structure for either of the designs. maybe get some inspiration from other work you see on the forum.

-Ashley Anderson

[sierra_style]

I like the second design more of the two. I think that the layout is much more interesting than the first one. I think that the background could be worked on to add to visual interest of the layout overall. It is a very good start though!

[seancl123]

The layouts are nice and i think you should play with your type more and maybe tone down the background.

[dzynecin88]

I like your second design the best. I think the texture creates a lot of visual interest. I'd like to see the image in the second design, though. Just sayin' - as a fellow horse lover

[Computer Lover]

I do prefer the second one over the first, and even with the color shine as the background, the colors blend well together. The only thing I'd suggest is putting a transparent background around the body text so it's easier to read. When there's a lot of colors like that it makes paragraphs more difficult to read.

[Stalksyouatnight]

Both of them are similar, but the second one has more lines and is more appealing. Everything is kind of simple, just making easy changes will go a long way.

[nikkihillman]

These are both nice. Although they are both pretty similar, I think the second one is easier to read and will work better with the grid.

[punkassbookjockey]

I like the second one better because the extra color gives it more vibrance. Both are very similar though.