Final Critique for Project 1

[japanese_panda]

I did not do big change.

I just change the location of icons, and color a little bit

[j.alexis93]

I think toning down the blue background really helped. I think your name looks really simple, but kind of works because it's a simple design.

[Blackfïsk]

Its got its own style going on, that's nice. Not much to change here.

[moserary]

Pretty and simple-but-creative. It makes one interested enough to dig deeper to see what all you have to offer.

[warren.asher@gmail.com]

I like how simple you kept it and it really works well. I would suggest putting your logo underneath your headline and making your headline a color instead of black.

[natsukigrc175]

This is simple enough and I like it. I would tone down the blue background as Alexis suggests. Other than that nice work!

[nicolemae09]

The simplicity is great. I am not sure I would know what kind of site I am looking at just from this home page. I feel like something more is needed, not quite sure what, maybe more info somewhere or something?

[daveryjones]

I think this is looking nice. I may be hallucinating but is the pink pencil bigger than the blue pencil? Good work, Yoshiki.

[ravennvrmre]

Your design’s simple and nice. I don’t have any suggestions for change. Looks nice

[japanese_panda]

Avery

I can see the pink pencil looks bigger, but size is same.

I think it is a problem of perception. Do you think it should be same size visually? not physically?