Project_1 Jose Gomez

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miss_kristine
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Re: Project_1 Jose Gomez

Post by miss_kristine »

I think you have a nice design overall. Your background image is bright, and your body copy is getting lost in some of the clouds. Also, I noticed some spelling/grammar errors in the body copy. I think the outlined type looked like the letters would glowing. I think it would make a good rollover, to start with the type, then rollover and the outline appears and the words looks like it's glowing.
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ashleighP
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This is probably a silly thing to be nitpicky, but I don't like how some of your things are capitalized and others aren't. Maybe it is the inner grammar Nazi inside of me, but it drives me nuts! Other than that, looks great, and I love the pig.
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Truben
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Overall good layout and like the picture you used feels like a car add almost. Agreeing with some other people as well not diggin the white text or the grammar as far as capital and not. Other than that good job.

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Overall good layout and like the picture you used feels like a car add almost. Agreeing with some other people as well not diggin the white text or the grammar as far as capital and not. Other than that good job.

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Great job overall. I noticed that you lose the text in the clouds. Maybe use a text box or a different color for the text. Overall I like it and the navigation that glow came out really cool.
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zelouzelou
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Green pig!!!!! :D
I really like how your design looks like it is just floating in the browser window by using gray as your background color. I don't think I would have ever thought of that.
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Re: Project_1 Jose Gomez

Post by MadBroChadBro »

I like your website overall. It is very nice and colorful. My only thing is about the pig. I am curious why you put it in the corner and what the significance is in your website. I am also not a huge fan of the green glow, but from critique, it is a lot better. Overall nice job.
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