Final Critique for Project#1

[sierra_style]

I love your layout it is so unique. I think that you may not need those rectangles on the sides, or maybe just lower the chroma or something. This site is something that will really catch peoples eye, nice work!

[japanese_panda]

it looks great.

but I wonder the bar on each side is necessary or not.

you do not have to make flame on your drawing, I think

[Instructor]

Now this is just a really cool design. It's a clean easy to follow layout, but it also looks like an infographic. In fact, I spent a minute looking through it, trying to figure out if it was telling me something. It's well laid out. I can find may way through it easily. Any large gaps are bridged by your transit map pattern in the background. The colorscheme works really well to highlight certain things and move the eye through. The accent colors at the bottom add visual interest without being too distracting. I like the figure on the city-bicycle/car too. He adds a bit of whimsical fun to a clean techy infographic.

The only issue I have is the gap between the content and the top bar seems a little large.

Awesome work! Keep it up.

[seancl123]

This is a great website it looks amazing, I really like the buttons on top they work well and all the art work works well in the design over all.