Project #1 Final Critique

[Instructor]

Oooooh. the alterations are pretty on point with this one. As with your first, it immediately establishes atmosphere via a background image and grayscale color scheme. It makes me depressed, in a good way. The page on top of that background is super cleanly laid out and easy to navigate. I like your fencepost navigation and the justified type is a very nice touch. Your logo continues to work well, being the only splash of color in a sea of gothic gray. Good use of contrast and color.

I'm not sold on the Photoshop "deepening" on your fencepost navigation, though. It's a bridge too far in my opinion.

Nice work. I look forward to seeing the real version.

[seancl123]

This design is really good i really like the transparency of the box so you can see the background but still being able to read the body well great job i really like it.