Projetc #2 - Preliminary Critique

[Computer Lover]

I'm in love with the first concept, I think it has a really strong design and I love how you used color and texture to go along with it. I think the branches for borders is really creative and unique! My only issue is when you do code it out, to make sure the body text doesn't have those unsightly gaps between the words in the body text.

[nicolemae09]

I like the window opening to your composition. I feel like you could find a better background of the inside, like maybe a wall texture or something. Also your text on the inside is super teeny tiny.

[moserary]

Both designs are brilliant! Though I loved peeking in through the window, I prefer all the natural elements in the first set, especially the old paper with the gorgeous font. Nice!! They should be very grateful you found them.

[Ka80kins]

I do like the idea of the swinging doors! But the first design is really clean! So you choose on this. Colors are also really nice, I'm glad I'm not the only one doing a western theme too!