Project 1, First Preliminary Critique

[gr8ful1]

I really like your top design. I think the colors are really dynamic and I like the use of angles. The only suggestion I have is maybe to make your e mail bigger, it seems too small. Your second design is good too, but it seems like more of a generic layout. The lighter blue in the about me section is a little harder to see, maybe darkening it a tiny bit would help.

[Benjamin_Nance]

I like both designs of your web sights. but the font isn't really working for me. i would mess around with that a little bit. other than that the layout is good.

[ravens.way]

I like the creative style in your first site. Increasing the font size in your paragraphs would improve readability. I like the second site the best. It shows your creativity using a simple style. It could be improved by darkening the font color or increasing the font size in your paragraphs to improve readability.