My Final Form ..Website

[Ryan_Hartman]

Here is all final version of my webpage with included input from the most common ideas given to me. Combining the two concepts with have both fonts, images and a nice set of colors. I avoided the 'hard' boxes and went with a more feathery look to my boxes. Fonts still show off my style the "90's gaming/rave party" style haha. kept the same images just because im lazy and my cartoon is not a Racoon it's a Wolf .But i hope you enjoy the concept.

[lornrocks]

I like the changes you made! It has a really soft, nice look. Love the color scheme and your illustration. The text really pops with that semi-transparent background behind it. I don't know you really at all, but I think from what I do know about you, this design suits you. My only suggestion would be to have played with fonts or font colors more or to play with size and position to really differentiate your buttons from your body text, but honestly it does still work the way it is. Nice job.

[dzynecin88]

Hi Ryan -
You've made some really effective changes since your first version. I like the way you softened your text boxes and increased legibility of your type. I think your wolf is great and has alot of personality! My only suggestion would be to create some space between the GRC 175 info and your nav bar, pushing everything down just a bit. Overall - looks good!

[rmiyashiro]

oi mate, good layout but there are some spelling errors in your body copy.

[ravens.way]

I love the colors. The font is easy to read and see. I love your cute character. Nice job.

[dnorwood]

This is much better and easier to read. I think it would look better if the TMCC stuff was white also. It being the only black type makes it distracting. Also...Spell Check! It doesn't look professional if words aren't spelled correctly, as in "collegg" (college) and "grop" (group). I kinda wish your picture was a little larger and centered under the project 1 heading better, but I can see the angled placement you achieved.

[dbranby]

I like the modifications you've made, although you still have a bit of a readability challenge with the competing fonts and the odd typo here and there. Refine it in your build and you'll be fine. Good luck!

[kaycee_weddell]

The changes you made to your site look much better. Although I agree you have some readability issues with your fonts. Good start though! It's looking much better!

[Joe_Morales]

very nice changes I like your changes to color and how you've played with type. Id shrink down your body copy its a little large and draws to much attention as opposed to your headers. Also careful with your proof reading I found a couple of spelling errors but well done with your changes.

[gr8ful1]

I think you did a great job combining the two into a solid design. The color scheme is really nice and I like the graphics in the background. I may suggest leaving a little more room above and below your navigation bar, the text just looks a little bunched up between it and the header and body copy. Good job!