Final Submission for P1

[dnorwood]

I had the hardest time deciding which of my two designs to go with for the final. I actually did a few revisions and finalized both of them. Since the designs are centered around the poem, I finally decided to go with the Mirror design. It is a more straight-forward visual of what the poem is about. I added a few effects to the items in the design to make them stand out better and formatted all of the text to make it more enjoyable to read. Other than that I left the layout pretty much the same.

[ravens.way]

I love how the design of your site displays a visual image to match the content of your poem. Your site is very well done.

[lornrocks]

Since your first version of this layout actually didn't need much changing, I'm glad to see you kept the changes to a minimum here. Great layout, lovely color scheme, and I like your poem matching your image. The texture in your backgrounds is especially nice and adds a nice feel to the whole design. Great job.

[dzynecin88]

I'm glad you chose this design for your final, Denise. I, too, like how it works in concert with your poem. Your colors are very peaceful and I like the way you remained consistent with your light source - it works very well with the texture of the background. Good job!

[rmiyashiro]

I love the earthy hues of this layout. The hues mixed with the texture make me feel very comfortable and relaxed, something I don't usually feel when I'm using technology. Good job!

[raoki]

Good job well done! I tried to find anything to point out... but it looks perfect!! ...Wait! Now I found only a thing you can fix! The navigation links are sssslightly not aligned. That's it! very good job

[dbranby]

Nicely done! The only thing I'd suggest is perhaps having your sans-serif nav font not be italicized, to provide contrast with the poem. That's the only thing that stuck out to me. Good luck on your build!

[kaycee_weddell]

Nice job! I enjoy your concept with the mirror and the poem. I think it provides unity to your design. Your color scheme is working really well also. I don't think I would really change anything.

[KamiGurl]

Denise,

I'm glad you went with this design and you didn't change too much on it! Overall it came out looking very well! I enjoy the color scheme and love how the poem goes along with your design! Nice work Denise! I wouldn't change a thing.

[gr8ful1]

I like this design a lot, the layout and color scheme are very warm and readable, and I think the mirror concept works really well. I might still try to put a background shade behind your head in the front facing photo of you, it looks stark white compared to the warmth of the other colors. Good job!