Project one Final

[gr8ful1]

I like this design and think that your illustration will work well with your color scheme. I think your right margin needs to be bigger, everything is close to the edge. I also think a space below your navigation bar would help give a break before your body copy, it's a little smushed. Good job!

[Instructor]

I like this! It has a storybook whimsy that really appeals to me. Good going, Aria.

It's super clean and looks like an illuminated page out of a storybook or an illustrated novel. The Beatrix Potter rabbit helps set an instant tone for the entire website. The type works well with this theme as well. It "feels" like a storybook font, both title and bodycopy. Color also plays a role here. Your colors are nicely chosen and work well with the rabbit image. There's a nice amount of margin between the habit and your text which gives.

Watch your right margin. It looks like everything is a little pressed up against the right side. Also, I think your bodycopy is too close to your navigation and would look better moved down. The line under your navigation too.

Nice work!

[dazey_duck]

I love how subtle and elegant your site is. I am excited to see what it will like like when you add your bunny illustration, also your use of white space works so well!

[jtenenbaum]

Hi, Aria. Great illustration you created. This gives me a feel of your work and design skills. Everything ties in well (fonts, colors and placement of your elements). Really like how you tucked the TMCC logo tastefully on the lower left corner. One small thing I noticed, I might have used a little more leading under the buttons and your body content - just to give it some air. GREAT WORK!