My Final Form ..Website

[KamiGurl]

Hey Ryan,

Overall, the changes you have made show! It's looking really good! I'd have to agree with the above comments tho that the readability is a little difficult. I can see the style your going for and you're almost there. Just keep researching those different fonts and you'll get there! Also, your header looks just a little to crammed for me. Just the GRC part... Maybe try moving everything down to give your name, GRC and navigation some room to breathe. Other than that, Great Work Ryan!

[Instructor]

You've got yourself a nice fun little design here, Ryan.

Your background gradient and lava lamp blob texture establish a fun whimsical feel without being overbearing on the content. I also like the implied horizon line you've established. Your raccoon dude keeps the fun feeling going. Nice detail with the shadow underneath him. I like the digital font used for the title and navigation and the bodycopy font works well to go with the background blobs. The navigation is large and easy to find. The bodycopy is easy to read. The whole layout is very clean and really brought to life by textures and type choices.

I'm not sure you needed the purple boxes behind your navigation buttons or content. I think your background was light enough to support the contrast. Also, your email and TMCC logo are a little too close to the edges at the bottom. The bodycopy font and the navigation/title font while each individually good, clash a little between the two of them. I probably would have picked one and done the whole thing in it.

Nice work!

[jtenenbaum]

Hi, Ryan. I like the color scheme you've chosen. Might be helpful to explore different fonts that might give more interest to your design. Can't wait to see your final design up on the web.


Jodi Tenenbaum

[ariaaearnest]

Hey Ryan!

Nice job. Your final layout looks much better. I would just watch for typos in your about. Also I would play around with your body type to make it easier to read. Other than that it looks fine to me.

[dazey_duck]

I really like the improvements you made to your site design. I think your color choices are more successful, however I think you should do away with that ugly grey at the bottom, I think your bright colors work really well and it takes away from your design.