Hi David,
All I can say is Wow! I love how you decided to put color in this! It made a big difference! I have nothing to comment on... everything looks as it should. GREAT JOB on your overall piece!
Project 1, Final Design
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Oooooh, changed it to color I see. Looking good, David.
Despite the change to color, it still has pretty good contrast. The use of color on the non-image portion of the design helps reinforce the colors of the image without disappearing into it or looking too monolithic. I like some of the type moves you made. The sky makes a good background for your name headline and bodycopy. The design uses margin very well. There's a lot of room for everything to breathe without getting too spread out. I even like the centralized TMCC logo.
My only real knock on it is that the navigation is spread out through the design and there's no real central area to go to navigate through the site. I suppose the project links in the bottom third are the closest there is.
Nice work!
Despite the change to color, it still has pretty good contrast. The use of color on the non-image portion of the design helps reinforce the colors of the image without disappearing into it or looking too monolithic. I like some of the type moves you made. The sky makes a good background for your name headline and bodycopy. The design uses margin very well. There's a lot of room for everything to breathe without getting too spread out. I even like the centralized TMCC logo.
My only real knock on it is that the navigation is spread out through the design and there's no real central area to go to navigate through the site. I suppose the project links in the bottom third are the closest there is.
Nice work!
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Hey there, I am liking what I see since you have changed the color in your site. I think it works well with the the image of yourself out on the ocean. Your site also give off a message of freedom and adventure since you let the photo speak for itself. I think you should work with your navigation at the top of your page since the spacing looks like it was done on a whim. It should look like it has been spaced out evenly with care.
Kaylyn Dazey
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Hi, David. Super nice design overall. The colors you've chosen really blend well making the entire site professional and easy to navigate. Great photo placement of content around your left shoulder. Also, the TMCC logo blends nicely. Superb Work!
Jodi Tenenbaum