My final layout for Project 1.

[gr8ful1]

The changes you have made are great! I like the addition of the header and footer bars, and moving your content to the right a little. It all adds contrast and balances it out really well. The only thing throwing me off a little is the yellow tmcc logo, it seems like a random color. Maybe trying a green from your floral design would make it not draw mu eye there immediately. Great job overall!

[Instructor]

Ah! You have no face!

You've got a very nice set of colors here, Remi. They work well with your accent image on the left. The greens also go well with the browns and reds in your terrifying faceless logo. Your type is well chosen, cleanly laid out, and easy to read. I especially like the type you chose for your name headline. Nice work with the horizontal accent lines to frame your bodycopy. It's a nice echo of your overall composition with the dark header and footer. The navigation is large and easy to use. You have great use of margin through the design. Excellent use of proximity to provide grouping as well.

The only issue I can find is that the navigation at the top of the composition is a little spread out, causing it to loose unity.

Nice work!

[dazey_duck]

This is such a beautiful website! your colors images and transparencies all look amazing! Bravo Bravo! Your illustration also adds great personality and character to the site design as a whole. Il love the sophistication you put into this!

[jtenenbaum]

Hi, Remi. Great illustration of "you", color palette and very clean design. I think this is a really strong depiction of your design abilities. I might have scaled down the TMCC logo or moved down with the footer. Great work.
Jodi Tenenbaum