Project One Final

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KamiGurl
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Re: Project One Final

Post by KamiGurl »

Great job on all your changes Kristen! All of them came together nicely and made your layout successful. I'm glad you ended up going with this design. I agree with the above comments, to maybe up your opacity behind your text just a little bit and to move the TMCC logo a hair down. Other than that you did Great!
~Kami

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Re: Project One Final

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Now this is a nice clean layout. looking at it makes me smell a lush forest on a spring day. Nicely done, Kirsten.

I like the use of the dark green header and footer as a framing device for the content. The dark olive works well with the forest background picture. That background picture acts as a great texture to add visual interest to an otherwise clean design. Your navigation is large and easy to find/use. Your bodycopy is nicely sized for easy reading.

Two issues. One, the TMCC logo is awfully close to your class type in the footer. It should be a little smaller and not vertically stretched. Two, I think your text background box could use to be a little less transparent. The image disrupts the type a little as it is.

Good work!
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dazey_duck
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Re: Project One Final

Post by dazey_duck »

Wow i love the improvement that you made for this. Everything is framed neatly and the color is working very well with you background image. I would just work on your typography for you heading, email and program info.
Kaylyn Dazey
GRC Student at TMCC

jtenenbaum
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Re: Project One Final

Post by jtenenbaum »

Hi, Kirsten. I like how your photo leads your eye directly into your web site and your color choices blend well with the colors in your photo. I might have scaled down the TMCC logo and played with other color choices for your name at the top. Great job!
Jodi Tenenbaum

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