final_project_01

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gr8ful1
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Re: final_project_01

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I am happy you went with the black and white design, I think it's a very strong one and very well composed. I really like the addition of the image in the background, I think it adds some interest and texture that was missing in the rough design.
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Now this is how you do contrast. Nice work, Joseph.

Such a simple clean layout. It's given so much visual interest by a faded almost textural image in the background. The header is a textbook example of contrast. The font works well with your design. The thick vertical structures in your type contrast nicely with the thick horizontal structures in your design. Nice use of drop shadows to add just a bit more texture and some depth too. The navigation is easy to find/use.

Two nitpicks. One, I think your class text would look a little better with a bit more space between it and the vertical lines that intersect it. Two, your bodycopy is kind of a blob and difficult to read. I think it doesn't need to be tracked as tightly as it is.

Very nice!
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Re: final_project_01

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Theres so much prestige and structure in your site design and it looks really professional. I love that you kept the black and white elements with strong edges. Good job!
Kaylyn Dazey
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Re: final_project_01

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Hi, Joseph. I like the clean simple design and how you centered all your elements then placed your buttons on the top right. Your justified text is a great touch - it's not used that often but really works. I also noticed that you tastefully placed the TMCC logo into your footer. It flows well. Great job!
Jodi Tenenbaum

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