Re: prelim
Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2015 9:15 am
Ooooh interesting.
Your first design has excellent contrast and a much stronger, more unified layout. I like the use of contrast. The black background really works with the TMCC lime green. I also like the stacked construction paper cutout look of the entire thing. It really lends itself to some interesting ideas. I like your current page stack idea. Each page is like an index card, one behind the other. A neat concept and pretty easy to execute as well (z-index ahoy!). I like the sketchy title type. It nicely visually represents one aspect of the program. You've also got a nice area for lost of photos. Take advantage of it.
I'm not sold one the white boxes though, especially behind the title and as the last box behind the content. I'd probably make the last box behind the content a gray and make the white box behind the title look more obviously like paper. In fact, playing with texture would really add something nice to this whole design. Maybe some paper textures, or halftones, or scanlines would look interesting with that layout. Watch your margins on your navigation, it's bumping against the right edge of the document window. Perhaps enlarge your nav area a bit.
A very good start!
Your first design has excellent contrast and a much stronger, more unified layout. I like the use of contrast. The black background really works with the TMCC lime green. I also like the stacked construction paper cutout look of the entire thing. It really lends itself to some interesting ideas. I like your current page stack idea. Each page is like an index card, one behind the other. A neat concept and pretty easy to execute as well (z-index ahoy!). I like the sketchy title type. It nicely visually represents one aspect of the program. You've also got a nice area for lost of photos. Take advantage of it.
I'm not sold one the white boxes though, especially behind the title and as the last box behind the content. I'd probably make the last box behind the content a gray and make the white box behind the title look more obviously like paper. In fact, playing with texture would really add something nice to this whole design. Maybe some paper textures, or halftones, or scanlines would look interesting with that layout. Watch your margins on your navigation, it's bumping against the right edge of the document window. Perhaps enlarge your nav area a bit.
A very good start!