Re: Project one Preliminary critique
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 5:51 pm
I like your style on both of these designs and am having a hard time deciding which one I like best.
The rabbit rough definitely says child's storybook. The only change I would make would be to move your name, maybe just up some. Right now it is crowding the rest too much.
I am in love with the sunset clouds in the other one, but (yeah...there's always a 'but') your text looks lost down there in the bottom left. This is just another case of moving it and your name (with the same spacing) up some.
Happy Designing!
The rabbit rough definitely says child's storybook. The only change I would make would be to move your name, maybe just up some. Right now it is crowding the rest too much.
I am in love with the sunset clouds in the other one, but (yeah...there's always a 'but') your text looks lost down there in the bottom left. This is just another case of moving it and your name (with the same spacing) up some.
Happy Designing!