Final Submission for P1

[Instructor]

Very nice, Denise!

The thing that stands out to me is the use of subtle patterning to add visual interest and warmth to a very clean simple design. Your color scheme serves to reinforce that warmth and adds a "craft art" feel to the whole piece. Typographically it works as well. Each piece of type is well chosen and serves to illustrate it's content as well as reinforcing the overall look and feel. Your navigation is easy to find/use. In fact, all of the informational parts of this website are very clear and easy to see. Nice work blending the TMCC logo with your composition as well.

Just a couple of issues. The navigation type should be the same size and on the same baseline. Right now there are slight differences in all oft hem and it stands out a bit.

Great work!

[ariaaearnest]

Hi Denise!

I really like how your final design turned out! The colors are soft and very pleasing to the eye. I also like how your visuals match the poem you have. Good job!

[dazey_duck]

Your site has been one of my favorites from the start. I love your background texture and they way you have yourself looking at your own reflection. Your site looks bold and humble at the same time. While your navigation works really well I think you can do a little more work on making your body copy pop out more.

[jtenenbaum]

Hi, Denise. Your photoshop skills worked well combining your photo into the mirror - I also like how the poem reflects what you are thinking. Good background and color echoing throughout. Maybe check alignment on the base of your buttons. Great work!