project 2 preliminary critique

[ariaaearnest]

Hello Denise,

I like your first design more. The layout is more consistent than your second rough. I would keep the header image in both of your pages in your first rough so it . The texture you used for your background is nice too as well as your color choices. I would change the font color to a darker gold to match your image in the header. I would also get a better picture of Linda if you can, it's very blurry! also I would put the photo were your body copy is rather than on the navigation bar.

Aria

[dazey_duck]

Hello I like that you used the image of all the herbs as you background in you very last design. I think you should you that as your background consistently because I though your site was a garden shop. Other than that I like the type that you used for your last design too, and your navigation is easy to navigate.

[dbranby]

I like the second iteration because it's less daunting (less copy). I, like a lot of people, tend to skim rather than read online, so that lightness, along with the natural grass elements, really spoke to me. Good luck with your build!