Re: project 2 preliminary critique
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2016 2:48 pm
Hello Denise,
I like your first design more. The layout is more consistent than your second rough. I would keep the header image in both of your pages in your first rough so it . The texture you used for your background is nice too as well as your color choices. I would change the font color to a darker gold to match your image in the header. I would also get a better picture of Linda if you can, it's very blurry! also I would put the photo were your body copy is rather than on the navigation bar.
Aria
I like your first design more. The layout is more consistent than your second rough. I would keep the header image in both of your pages in your first rough so it . The texture you used for your background is nice too as well as your color choices. I would change the font color to a darker gold to match your image in the header. I would also get a better picture of Linda if you can, it's very blurry! also I would put the photo were your body copy is rather than on the navigation bar.
Aria