Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2016 1:58 pm
Hey Lauren!
I really like your first design and i think it's the stronger one of the two. The homepage looks really good and the color and texture you use on the background really bring it together. I defiantly agree with you about the bio being too long. I would shorten it and divide it up so it doesn't look like a huge wall of text. Other than that It looks good.
Aria
I really like your first design and i think it's the stronger one of the two. The homepage looks really good and the color and texture you use on the background really bring it together. I defiantly agree with you about the bio being too long. I would shorten it and divide it up so it doesn't look like a huge wall of text. Other than that It looks good.
Aria