Re: Project 3 Roughs
Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 3:00 pm
Hi Lauren,
Both of your layouts came out really well! I like your first layout better tho. It is a little more visually interesting. The only suggestion I have is to somehow breakup the body copy. There is a lot of text there, so if you could think of a way to break it up and add to the visual interest, I think it would be more successful. Great job on your final layouts!
Both of your layouts came out really well! I like your first layout better tho. It is a little more visually interesting. The only suggestion I have is to somehow breakup the body copy. There is a lot of text there, so if you could think of a way to break it up and add to the visual interest, I think it would be more successful. Great job on your final layouts!