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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 3:00 pm
by KamiGurl
Hi Lauren,

Both of your layouts came out really well! I like your first layout better tho. It is a little more visually interesting. The only suggestion I have is to somehow breakup the body copy. There is a lot of text there, so if you could think of a way to break it up and add to the visual interest, I think it would be more successful. Great job on your final layouts!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 3:58 pm
by dzynecin88
I love the first set - very good contrast with just the right amount of color and suggestion of artistic expression. Your nav is clear and the layout is inviting. Great job!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 5:18 pm
by ariaaearnest
Hey Lauren!

I really like your first design! It's very simple but elegant. The stubble background texture is a nice touch. I would just play around with you type.

Aria

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 7:35 pm
by dazey_duck
I prefer you r top designs to your second. I like the way you used the white text on top of the images in your header, that being said I also really like your columns, they really create a nice flow of information. While your whole website looks really informative and educational I think a splash of bright color in your body will make it look more interesting.