Re: Project3 preliminary critique
Posted: Tue May 03, 2016 11:36 am
I like both of your designs, but I prefer the second space one. It feels more cohesive page-to-page to me, and is more visually interesting. I am having a hard time reading your lists of classes though, even zoomed in to normal screen size the font is too small to read. I think you have room to make it bigger though. I like the use of the graphic in the middle to contain the class listings.
Your first design is solid also, just more traditional. I feel like the color scheme doesn't flow to the second page very well though, maybe try to incorporate more of the main blue from the first page into it. I also think the DNA graphic reminds me more of biology than graphic design, so maybe something a little more artsy would work better. Good Job!
Your first design is solid also, just more traditional. I feel like the color scheme doesn't flow to the second page very well though, maybe try to incorporate more of the main blue from the first page into it. I also think the DNA graphic reminds me more of biology than graphic design, so maybe something a little more artsy would work better. Good Job!