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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2017 10:05 pm
by selvster5000
Melissa! I love your layout, the font change and background changes were great
decisions. The "m" definitely stands out more and creates more visual interest
throughout your design. The only thing I noticed is that I might make the font for
the body paragraph and the bottom text a little bigger. But overall nicely done!

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2017 3:19 pm
by darian_p
This is much better then the rough! I still feel it would work better though if you centered your name in the blue box above your body copy.

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:07 am
by Jose_M
Peelio,
Turned out great. I like the theme and overall layout. I think it can use an extra layer of body copy somewhere above your personal logo.


Jose Macias.

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:20 am
by breezy
Love the photo you used, I personally would make the body copy and logo/ type at the bottom just a little bigger. Over all love it!

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 1:04 pm
by Pearl_Underwood
I really like this! I love the way your "M" pops out with the vibrant colors! Great job!

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 8:51 pm
by chaytothet
I love this!

It's a really relaxing design, awesome picture as well.

I think it's very nice as is. No changes :)