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Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2017 5:56 pm
by Ariesboxsye
design 2 for me, honestly it feels way more creative and expressive. Speaking of, be very careful about not to go to professional with your second page there.

Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2017 11:28 pm
by breezy
Hey,

I really like your second layout, it's clean and logically laid out, great job!

Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2017 8:52 pm
by chaytothet
Hey!

I really like elements from both of your pieces!

I think combining these would work out well. The first has a really straightforward navigation bar and the other has the visual interest in the body.

good luck!